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Paper A
AP English Language — Practice Paper A
Original unofficial practice questions · paper A · answer key on the last page
Total time: see section headers · No guessing penalty
| Section | Questions | Format |
|---|---|---|
| Section I: Multiple Choice | ||
| Section II: Free Response |
Section I — Multiple Choice
Which rhetorical appeal relies on the credibility of the speaker?
A. EthosB. LogosC. PathosD. KairosA writer citing statistics uses the appeal of
A. logosB. pathosC. ethosD. allusion'The courtroom was a circus' is an example of
A. metaphorB. simileC. alliterationD. ironyTone is best described as the author's
A. attitudeB. subjectC. lengthD. audienceWhich sentence shows the strongest use of parallelism?
A. She likes hiking, swimming, and to bike.B. She likes hiking, swimming, and biking.C. She hikes, swims, and likes biking.D. She likes to hike, swim, bike,'Government of the people, by the people, for the people' uses
A. anaphoraB. hyperboleC. ironyD. understatementA counterargument is included to
A. strengthen the essay's credibilityB. confuse readersC. show biasD. break the argumentSynthesis essays ask the writer to
A. use multiple sourcesB. write fictionC. avoid evidenceD. summarize onlyWhich phrase is an example of an appositive?
A. my dog, a golden retriever,B. very fastC. under the tableD. loudly and clearlyThe purpose of a thesis statement is to
A. establish the claimB. end the essayC. list sourcesD. suggest imageryA sentence with one independent clause and one dependent clause is
A. complexB. compoundC. simpleD. compound-complexDiction refers to
A. word choiceB. sentence lengthC. paragraph orderD. punctuation'Time is money' is an example of
A. metaphorB. simileC. personificationD. onomatopoeiaAn argument that addresses only evidence that supports its claim commits
A. cherry-pickingB. an analogyC. a syllogismD. a counterexampleThe rhetorical situation includes all of the following EXCEPT
A. the essay's gradeB. the audienceC. the purposeD. the contextThe writer, audience, purpose, and context together make up the
A. rhetorical situationB. thesisC. counterargumentD. syntaxStatistics and expert testimony are forms of
A. evidenceB. pathosC. personaD. toneRepeated openings of successive clauses ('We will fight... We will fight...') is
A. anaphoraB. antithesisC. allusionD. understatementThe writer's attitude toward the subject is the
A. toneB. audienceC. genreD. plotThe reasoning that links evidence to a claim is the
A. warrantB. concessionC. qualifierD. anecdoteThe Toulmin model includes all of the following EXCEPT
A. settingB. claimC. warrantD. groundsA comparison that uses 'like' or 'as' is a
A. simileB. metaphorC. hyperboleD. synecdocheA direct comparison claiming identity ('time is a thief') is a
A. metaphorB. simileC. paradoxD. punThe best evidence for a claim about public policy is usually
A. data and expert testimonyB. unsupported opinionC. a rumorD. vague impressionsA brief personal story used as evidence is an
A. anecdoteB. allusionC. analogyD. indexThe synthesis essay asks you to
A. build an argument using multiple sourcesB. summarize every sourceC. avoid sourcesD. write a narrative onlyWhich practice is plagiarism?
A. Presenting a source's idea as your ownB. Citing a sourceC. Paraphrasing with attributionD. Quoting with quotation marksThe logical path from claim to conclusion is the
A. line of reasoningB. thesis restatementC. topicD. titleWords like 'first,' 'however,' and 'as a result' create
A. cohesionB. connotationC. registerD. moodA defensible thesis is one that
A. a reasonable person could disputeB. states an obvious factC. is unprovableD. avoids any positionSection II — Free Response
Read the rationale: the narrator describes a childhood in a shrinking mill town. Write a rhetorical analysis, in which you analyze the effects of the narrator's choices of diction, detail, and structure in conveying the emotional erosion of the community.
6 points · rubric: Clear thesis 2 pts, evidence + analysis 2 pts, sophistication 2 pts.
Read the two sources: (A) a mayor arguing to fund a youth public-transit subsidy; (B) a skeptic questioning cost. Write a synthesis essay that takes a position on the subsidy, using at least three sources and rebutting the skeptic.
6 points · rubric: Position + sources 2 pts, rebuttal 2 pts, integration 2 pts.
Write an argumentative essay supporting, refuting, or qualifying the claim that civic participation is declining because online engagement substitutes for in-person action.
6 points · rubric: Clear claim 2 pts, evidence + reasoning 2 pts, concessions 2 pts.
Analyze the effect of the following single sentence on tone and meaning: 'It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.'
3 points · rubric: Antithesis 1 pt, tonal effect 1 pt, analysis 1 pt.
Analyze the rhetorical situation of a speech given by a principal at the start of a school year, identifying speaker, audience, purpose, and occasion.
6 points · rubric: Each element identified with support 1-2 pts.
Explain how a reasoning chain connects the evidence that 'reading print improves comprehension' to the claim that 'schools should keep print textbooks,' including at least one warrant.
5 points · rubric: Evidence 1 pt, warrants 3 pts, claim link 1 pt.
Answer Key
1. Ethos — Ethos = character/credibility.
2. logos — Logos = logic/evidence.
3. metaphor — Direct comparison (metaphor).
4. attitude — Attitude toward the subject.
5. She likes hiking, swimming, and biking. — Consistent gerund forms.
6. anaphora — Repetition of 'the people'.
7. strengthen the essay's credibility — Shows fairness and rebuts.
8. use multiple sources — Combine and cite sources.
9. my dog, a golden retriever, — Renaming noun phrase.
10. establish the claim — Central claim/focus.
11. complex — Complex sentence.
12. word choice — Word choice.
13. metaphor — Implicit comparison.
14. cherry-picking — Selection bias in evidence.
15. the essay's grade — Grade is not part of the rhetorical situation.
16. rhetorical situation — These elements form the rhetorical situation.
17. evidence — Facts, numbers, and expert opinion are evidence.
18. anaphora — Anaphora repeats the opening phrase.
19. tone — Tone is the attitude conveyed by language.
20. warrant — The warrant explains why the evidence supports the claim.
21. setting — Setting is not part of Toulmin's argument framework.
22. simile — Similes make explicit comparisons.
23. metaphor — Metaphors claim identity rather than likeness.
24. data and expert testimony — Policy claims need verifiable data and expertise.
25. anecdote — Anecdotes personalize arguments.
26. build an argument using multiple sources — Synthesis integrates sources to support a position.
27. Presenting a source's idea as your own — Using others' ideas without attribution is plagiarism.
28. line of reasoning — The line of reasoning is the argument's logic trail.
29. cohesion — Transitions produce cohesion.
30. a reasonable person could dispute — Disputable claims make strong theses.
Free response — rubric notes
1. Clear thesis 2 pts, evidence + analysis 2 pts, sophistication 2 pts. · model: Thesis on erosion via concrete detail and anachronistic diction; body paragraphs tie word choice (e.g., 'shrank', 'echoed') and cumulative syntax to emotional toll; consideration of audience.
2. Position + sources 2 pts, rebuttal 2 pts, integration 2 pts. · model: Position services-equity and jobs access; cite ridership data and school-attendance evidence; rebut cost with federal matching and long-run ROI; counter the skeptic.
3. Clear claim 2 pts, evidence + reasoning 2 pts, concessions 2 pts. · model: Define participation; grant online growth but argue depth; use protest and school-board data; qualify where online tools raise access.
4. Antithesis 1 pt, tonal effect 1 pt, analysis 1 pt. · model: Antithesis presents opposing views of the era; balanced parallelism creates irony and signals a divided world.
5. Each element identified with support 1-2 pts. · model: The speaker is the principal, who has institutional authority. The audience is students and staff at the start of a new year. The purpose is to set expectations and build motivation. The occasion is the annual opening, a moment when attention is high and the community is gathering fresh.
6. Evidence 1 pt, warrants 3 pts, claim link 1 pt. · model: Evidence: studies find better comprehension in print. Warrant 1: comprehension is the goal of reading instruction. Warrant 2: textbooks serve instruction rather than entertainment. Therefore, where print comprehension is higher, print textbooks better serve the school's purpose, supporting the claim.
Paper B
AP English Language — Practice Paper B
Original unofficial practice questions · paper B · answer key on the last page
Total time: see section headers · No guessing penalty
| Section | Questions | Format |
|---|---|---|
| Section I: Multiple Choice | ||
| Section II: Free Response |
Section I — Multiple Choice
Which rhetorical appeal relies on the credibility of the speaker?
A. KairosB. LogosC. EthosD. PathosA writer citing statistics uses the appeal of
A. pathosB. ethosC. allusionD. logos'The courtroom was a circus' is an example of
A. simileB. metaphorC. ironyD. alliterationTone is best described as the author's
A. audienceB. lengthC. attitudeD. subjectWhich sentence shows the strongest use of parallelism?
A. She hikes, swims, and likes biking.B. She likes hiking, swimming, and to bike.C. She likes hiking, swimming, and biking.D. She likes to hike, swim, bike,'Government of the people, by the people, for the people' uses
A. ironyB. understatementC. anaphoraD. hyperboleA counterargument is included to
A. confuse readersB. break the argumentC. show biasD. strengthen the essay's credibilitySynthesis essays ask the writer to
A. summarize onlyB. use multiple sourcesC. avoid evidenceD. write fictionWhich phrase is an example of an appositive?
A. very fastB. under the tableC. my dog, a golden retriever,D. loudly and clearlyThe purpose of a thesis statement is to
A. end the essayB. suggest imageryC. list sourcesD. establish the claimA sentence with one independent clause and one dependent clause is
A. compound-complexB. complexC. compoundD. simpleDiction refers to
A. punctuationB. sentence lengthC. paragraph orderD. word choice'Time is money' is an example of
A. onomatopoeiaB. personificationC. metaphorD. simileAn argument that addresses only evidence that supports its claim commits
A. an analogyB. a counterexampleC. cherry-pickingD. a syllogismThe rhetorical situation includes all of the following EXCEPT
A. the audienceB. the contextC. the purposeD. the essay's gradeThe writer, audience, purpose, and context together make up the
A. rhetorical situationB. thesisC. counterargumentD. syntaxStatistics and expert testimony are forms of
A. evidenceB. toneC. pathosD. personaRepeated openings of successive clauses ('We will fight... We will fight...') is
A. understatementB. anaphoraC. antithesisD. allusionThe writer's attitude toward the subject is the
A. plotB. toneC. genreD. audienceThe reasoning that links evidence to a claim is the
A. anecdoteB. concessionC. qualifierD. warrantThe Toulmin model includes all of the following EXCEPT
A. settingB. warrantC. claimD. groundsA comparison that uses 'like' or 'as' is a
A. metaphorB. simileC. synecdocheD. hyperboleA direct comparison claiming identity ('time is a thief') is a
A. punB. simileC. paradoxD. metaphorThe best evidence for a claim about public policy is usually
A. a rumorB. data and expert testimonyC. vague impressionsD. unsupported opinionA brief personal story used as evidence is an
A. analogyB. anecdoteC. allusionD. indexThe synthesis essay asks you to
A. write a narrative onlyB. summarize every sourceC. avoid sourcesD. build an argument using multiple sourcesWhich practice is plagiarism?
A. Presenting a source's idea as your ownB. Citing a sourceC. Quoting with quotation marksD. Paraphrasing with attributionThe logical path from claim to conclusion is the
A. line of reasoningB. thesis restatementC. topicD. titleWords like 'first,' 'however,' and 'as a result' create
A. registerB. connotationC. moodD. cohesionA defensible thesis is one that
A. states an obvious factB. a reasonable person could disputeC. is unprovableD. avoids any positionSection II — Free Response
Read the rationale: the narrator describes a childhood in a shrinking mill town. Write a rhetorical analysis, in which you analyze the effects of the narrator's choices of diction, detail, and structure in conveying the emotional erosion of the community.
6 points · rubric: Clear thesis 2 pts, evidence + analysis 2 pts, sophistication 2 pts.
Read the two sources: (A) a mayor arguing to fund a youth public-transit subsidy; (B) a skeptic questioning cost. Write a synthesis essay that takes a position on the subsidy, using at least three sources and rebutting the skeptic.
6 points · rubric: Position + sources 2 pts, rebuttal 2 pts, integration 2 pts.
Write an argumentative essay supporting, refuting, or qualifying the claim that civic participation is declining because online engagement substitutes for in-person action.
6 points · rubric: Clear claim 2 pts, evidence + reasoning 2 pts, concessions 2 pts.
Analyze the effect of the following single sentence on tone and meaning: 'It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.'
3 points · rubric: Antithesis 1 pt, tonal effect 1 pt, analysis 1 pt.
Analyze the rhetorical situation of a speech given by a principal at the start of a school year, identifying speaker, audience, purpose, and occasion.
6 points · rubric: Each element identified with support 1-2 pts.
Explain how a reasoning chain connects the evidence that 'reading print improves comprehension' to the claim that 'schools should keep print textbooks,' including at least one warrant.
5 points · rubric: Evidence 1 pt, warrants 3 pts, claim link 1 pt.
Answer Key
1. Ethos — Ethos = character/credibility.
2. logos — Logos = logic/evidence.
3. metaphor — Direct comparison (metaphor).
4. attitude — Attitude toward the subject.
5. She likes hiking, swimming, and biking. — Consistent gerund forms.
6. anaphora — Repetition of 'the people'.
7. strengthen the essay's credibility — Shows fairness and rebuts.
8. use multiple sources — Combine and cite sources.
9. my dog, a golden retriever, — Renaming noun phrase.
10. establish the claim — Central claim/focus.
11. complex — Complex sentence.
12. word choice — Word choice.
13. metaphor — Implicit comparison.
14. cherry-picking — Selection bias in evidence.
15. the essay's grade — Grade is not part of the rhetorical situation.
16. rhetorical situation — These elements form the rhetorical situation.
17. evidence — Facts, numbers, and expert opinion are evidence.
18. anaphora — Anaphora repeats the opening phrase.
19. tone — Tone is the attitude conveyed by language.
20. warrant — The warrant explains why the evidence supports the claim.
21. setting — Setting is not part of Toulmin's argument framework.
22. simile — Similes make explicit comparisons.
23. metaphor — Metaphors claim identity rather than likeness.
24. data and expert testimony — Policy claims need verifiable data and expertise.
25. anecdote — Anecdotes personalize arguments.
26. build an argument using multiple sources — Synthesis integrates sources to support a position.
27. Presenting a source's idea as your own — Using others' ideas without attribution is plagiarism.
28. line of reasoning — The line of reasoning is the argument's logic trail.
29. cohesion — Transitions produce cohesion.
30. a reasonable person could dispute — Disputable claims make strong theses.
Free response — rubric notes
1. Clear thesis 2 pts, evidence + analysis 2 pts, sophistication 2 pts. · model: Thesis on erosion via concrete detail and anachronistic diction; body paragraphs tie word choice (e.g., 'shrank', 'echoed') and cumulative syntax to emotional toll; consideration of audience.
2. Position + sources 2 pts, rebuttal 2 pts, integration 2 pts. · model: Position services-equity and jobs access; cite ridership data and school-attendance evidence; rebut cost with federal matching and long-run ROI; counter the skeptic.
3. Clear claim 2 pts, evidence + reasoning 2 pts, concessions 2 pts. · model: Define participation; grant online growth but argue depth; use protest and school-board data; qualify where online tools raise access.
4. Antithesis 1 pt, tonal effect 1 pt, analysis 1 pt. · model: Antithesis presents opposing views of the era; balanced parallelism creates irony and signals a divided world.
5. Each element identified with support 1-2 pts. · model: The speaker is the principal, who has institutional authority. The audience is students and staff at the start of a new year. The purpose is to set expectations and build motivation. The occasion is the annual opening, a moment when attention is high and the community is gathering fresh.
6. Evidence 1 pt, warrants 3 pts, claim link 1 pt. · model: Evidence: studies find better comprehension in print. Warrant 1: comprehension is the goal of reading instruction. Warrant 2: textbooks serve instruction rather than entertainment. Therefore, where print comprehension is higher, print textbooks better serve the school's purpose, supporting the claim.
Full-length study package exam
AP English Language and Composition — Full Practice Exam
Section I: Multiple-Choice Questions
Time: 60 minutes 45 questions
Passage 1 (Questions 1–9)
The following is an excerpt from a fictional essay about the relationship between walking and thinking.
"For most of human history, walking and thinking were not separate activities. The philosopher walked and thought. The farmer walked and planned. The shepherd walked and wondered. Walking was the medium through which the mind moved as naturally as the body. Then, somewhere in the last century, we decided that thinking required sitting — that the proper posture for serious intellectual work was stationary, preferably in a chair, ideally in a room with no windows. We built schools with desks bolted to the floor and offices with cubicles designed for immobility, and we told ourselves that this was progress. But the mind does not respect our architectural preferences. Research now confirms what every restless student has always suspected: walking improves creative thinking. A series of studies found that participants who walked — even on a treadmill facing a blank wall — produced significantly more creative responses than participants who sat. Walking outdoors produced the strongest effects, but even indoor walking outperformed sitting. The mechanism is not fully understood, though researchers suggest that the rhythmic, automatic nature of walking may free cognitive resources for creative tasks. Whatever the explanation, the practical implication is clear: we have designed our schools and workplaces to suppress one of the most accessible tools for thinking well. The costs of this design are invisible but real — stifled creativity, diminished focus, and the slow erosion of the connection between body and mind that walking sustains." The following is an excerpt from a fictional memoir about growing up in a bilingual household.
"My mother spoke to us in Spanish and to the world in English, and the boundary between these two languages was also the boundary between two versions of her. In Spanish, she was expansive — quick to laugh, generous with stories, willing to argue about politics or religion or whether the neighbors' dog was possessed by an unfriendly spirit. In English, she became careful. Not silent — she was never silent — but measured, as though each word in her second language cost something and she did not want to waste it. I understood, even as a child, that this was not a personality difference but a language difference. The same woman who would spent an hour telling a story about her childhood in Mexico — complete with sound effects and impersonations of her grandmother — would, in a parent-teacher conference, reduce the same story to a single sentence: 'We moved here for better opportunities.' It was accurate. It was also, I would learn years later, the least interesting thing about why we moved." The following is an excerpt from a fictional speech by a community leader about a proposed development project.
"I stand before you today not to oppose development. Let me be clear about that. I understand that this city needs to grow, that empty lots do not pay taxes, and that the proposed mixed-use development would bring jobs and revenue. I have read the economic impact statement. I have studied the traffic studies. The numbers are not in dispute. What is in dispute is what kind of city we want to be. The proposed development includes 400 residential units, a grocery store, and a parking garage. What it does not include — what no one on the development team has mentioned in any of the public meetings I have attended — is any space for the community that currently exists on this site. The farmers' market that has operated on this land every Saturday for fifteen years. The informal soccer games that bring together families from four different neighborhoods. The bench under the oak tree where Mr. Huang has eaten his lunch every day since he retired from the post office. These are not impediments to progress. They are the progress — the kind that cannot be measured in tax revenue but that makes a place worth living in. I am asking the council to require the developer to preserve these community uses within the new development. This is not anti-development. It is pro-community." The following is an excerpt from a fictional essay about the language of weather forecasts.
"Weather forecasts have a peculiar relationship with certainty. They are among the few professional predictions that we expect to be wrong — not occasionally, not as a rare failure, but routinely and without consequence. When a meteorologist announces a thirty percent chance of rain and it does not rain, no one demands an investigation. No one writes an editorial questioning the competence of the National Weather Service. We accept the uncertainty because we understand, at some intuitive level, that weather is complex and that perfect prediction is impossible. This acceptance stands in sharp contrast to our treatment of uncertainty in other domains. In politics, a candidate who changes position is called a flip-flopper, as though adjusting one's views in response to new information were a character flaw rather than a sign of intellectual honesty. In medicine, a doctor who says 'I'm not sure' is often perceived as less competent than one who delivers a diagnosis with unwavering confidence, even when the uncertain doctor may be more accurate. We have, in other words, a culture that rewards false certainty and punishes the honest acknowledgment of complexity. Perhaps we could learn something from the meteorologist — not about barometric pressure or wind shear but about the wisdom of saying 'here is what I think is most likely, and here is the degree of confidence I have in that prediction, and here is what could change.' That formulation, applied more broadly, might make our public discourse slightly more honest and our public officials slightly more humble." The following is an excerpt from a fictional essay about memorization and education.
"There was a time when memorization was the foundation of education. Students recited poems, chanted multiplication tables, and committed to memory the names of kings and the dates of battles. Then progressive educators declared that memorization was rote, mechanical, and hostile to genuine understanding. Education, they argued, should develop critical thinking, not train human tape recorders. This critique had merit. Memorization without understanding is indeed a hollow exercise — a student who can recite the Gettysburg Address but cannot explain why it matters has learned words, not ideas. But the progressive critique went too far. In discarding memorization, we discarded something essential: the relationship between knowing something and holding it in your mind. There is a difference between reading a poem and knowing a poem. When you have memorized a poem, you carry it with you. It becomes part of your interior landscape, available not just when you choose to look it up but when you need it — when a line surfaces unbidden during a moment of grief or joy or confusion and connects your experience to something larger than yourself. The same is true of historical dates, mathematical formulas, and scientific principles. Memorization is not the opposite of understanding. It is a prerequisite for the kind of fluent, flexible thinking that we claim to value. You cannot think critically about a subject you do not know, and knowing — truly knowing — means holding information in your mind, not merely knowing where to find it." "We admire generosity but we do not fund it. We praise the donor who gives millions to a hospital wing but we design an economic system that rewards accumulation and penalizes distribution. The wealthy are celebrated for what they give away, never questioned about what they keep — as though charity were a substitute for justice rather than a symptom of its absence. Consider the rhetoric: we speak of 'giving back,' a phrase that implies that something was taken, that the accumulation of wealth involved a withdrawal from the common good that generosity merely repays. If wealth were distributed justly in the first place, there would be nothing to give back. I do not say this to condemn generosity. Generosity is a virtue. But it is a virtue that should be unnecessary at the scale at which we currently practice it. When a society relies on the voluntary kindness of the wealthy to fund hospitals, schools, and disaster relief, it has outsourced its obligations to the discretionary goodwill of its most privileged citizens. This arrangement flatters the wealthy — you are a benefactor, a philanthropist, a changer of lives — while obscuring the structural conditions that make their generosity necessary and their wealth possible. The hospital wing named for a donor exists because the system that produced the donor's wealth also produced the poverty that makes the hospital necessary. These are not separate stories. They are the same story."
(D) Argue that modern society is inferior to premodern society
3. The phrase "the mind does not respect our architectural preferences" is an example of
(A) Simile
(B) Personification
(C) Metonymy
(D) Hyperbole
4. The passage's tone can best be described as
(A) Bitter and resentful
(B) Playful and satirical
(C) Thoughtful and mildly critical
(D) Urgent and alarmist
5. The author mentions research findings primarily to
(A) Establish logos by providing empirical support for the argument
(B) Appeal to pathos by showing how much we have lost
(C) Establish ethos by demonstrating the author's scientific expertise
(D) Refute a specific counterargument
6. The sentence "Whatever the explanation, the practical implication is clear" is an example of a
(A) Loose sentence
(B) Periodic sentence
(C) Fragment
(D) Run-on sentence
7. The author's claim that "we have designed our schools and workplaces to suppress one of the most accessible tools for thinking well" is best described as
(A) A claim of fact
(B) A claim of value
(C) A claim of policy
(D) An unsupported assertion
8. Which of the following best describes the organizational pattern of the passage?
(A) Chronological, tracing the history of walking
(B) Problem-solution, though the solution is only implied
(C) Cause and effect, explaining why walking improves thinking
(D) Spatial, describing different walking environments
9. The final clause ("the slow erosion of the connection between body and mind that walking sustains") uses which syntactic structure?
(A) A simple sentence
(B) An independent clause followed by a dependent clause
(C) A dependent clause that modifies "erosion"
(D) A compound sentence
Passage 2 (Questions 10–18)
The following is an excerpt from a fictional memoir about growing up in a bilingual household.
"My mother spoke to us in Spanish and to the world in English, and the boundary between these two languages was also the boundary between two versions of her. In Spanish, she was expansive — quick to laugh, generous with stories, willing to argue about politics or religion or whether the neighbors' dog was possessed by an unfriendly spirit. In English, she became careful. Not silent — she was never silent — but measured, as though each word in her second language cost something and she did not want to waste it. I understood, even as a child, that this was not a personality difference but a language difference. The same woman who would spent an hour telling a story about her childhood in Mexico — complete with sound effects and impersonations of her grandmother — would, in a parent-teacher conference, reduce the same story to a single sentence: 'We moved here for better opportunities.' It was accurate. It was also, I would learn years later, the least interesting thing about why we moved." The following is an excerpt from a fictional speech by a community leader about a proposed development project.
"I stand before you today not to oppose development. Let me be clear about that. I understand that this city needs to grow, that empty lots do not pay taxes, and that the proposed mixed-use development would bring jobs and revenue. I have read the economic impact statement. I have studied the traffic studies. The numbers are not in dispute. What is in dispute is what kind of city we want to be. The proposed development includes 400 residential units, a grocery store, and a parking garage. What it does not include — what no one on the development team has mentioned in any of the public meetings I have attended — is any space for the community that currently exists on this site. The farmers' market that has operated on this land every Saturday for fifteen years. The informal soccer games that bring together families from four different neighborhoods. The bench under the oak tree where Mr. Huang has eaten his lunch every day since he retired from the post office. These are not impediments to progress. They are the progress — the kind that cannot be measured in tax revenue but that makes a place worth living in. I am asking the council to require the developer to preserve these community uses within the new development. This is not anti-development. It is pro-community." The following is an excerpt from a fictional essay about the language of weather forecasts.
"Weather forecasts have a peculiar relationship with certainty. They are among the few professional predictions that we expect to be wrong — not occasionally, not as a rare failure, but routinely and without consequence. When a meteorologist announces a thirty percent chance of rain and it does not rain, no one demands an investigation. No one writes an editorial questioning the competence of the National Weather Service. We accept the uncertainty because we understand, at some intuitive level, that weather is complex and that perfect prediction is impossible. This acceptance stands in sharp contrast to our treatment of uncertainty in other domains. In politics, a candidate who changes position is called a flip-flopper, as though adjusting one's views in response to new information were a character flaw rather than a sign of intellectual honesty. In medicine, a doctor who says 'I'm not sure' is often perceived as less competent than one who delivers a diagnosis with unwavering confidence, even when the uncertain doctor may be more accurate. We have, in other words, a culture that rewards false certainty and punishes the honest acknowledgment of complexity. Perhaps we could learn something from the meteorologist — not about barometric pressure or wind shear but about the wisdom of saying 'here is what I think is most likely, and here is the degree of confidence I have in that prediction, and here is what could change.' That formulation, applied more broadly, might make our public discourse slightly more honest and our public officials slightly more humble." The following is an excerpt from a fictional essay about memorization and education.
"There was a time when memorization was the foundation of education. Students recited poems, chanted multiplication tables, and committed to memory the names of kings and the dates of battles. Then progressive educators declared that memorization was rote, mechanical, and hostile to genuine understanding. Education, they argued, should develop critical thinking, not train human tape recorders. This critique had merit. Memorization without understanding is indeed a hollow exercise — a student who can recite the Gettysburg Address but cannot explain why it matters has learned words, not ideas. But the progressive critique went too far. In discarding memorization, we discarded something essential: the relationship between knowing something and holding it in your mind. There is a difference between reading a poem and knowing a poem. When you have memorized a poem, you carry it with you. It becomes part of your interior landscape, available not just when you choose to look it up but when you need it — when a line surfaces unbidden during a moment of grief or joy or confusion and connects your experience to something larger than yourself. The same is true of historical dates, mathematical formulas, and scientific principles. Memorization is not the opposite of understanding. It is a prerequisite for the kind of fluent, flexible thinking that we claim to value. You cannot think critically about a subject you do not know, and knowing — truly knowing — means holding information in your mind, not merely knowing where to find it." "We admire generosity but we do not fund it. We praise the donor who gives millions to a hospital wing but we design an economic system that rewards accumulation and penalizes distribution. The wealthy are celebrated for what they give away, never questioned about what they keep — as though charity were a substitute for justice rather than a symptom of its absence. Consider the rhetoric: we speak of 'giving back,' a phrase that implies that something was taken, that the accumulation of wealth involved a withdrawal from the common good that generosity merely repays. If wealth were distributed justly in the first place, there would be nothing to give back. I do not say this to condemn generosity. Generosity is a virtue. But it is a virtue that should be unnecessary at the scale at which we currently practice it. When a society relies on the voluntary kindness of the wealthy to fund hospitals, schools, and disaster relief, it has outsourced its obligations to the discretionary goodwill of its most privileged citizens. This arrangement flatters the wealthy — you are a benefactor, a philanthropist, a changer of lives — while obscuring the structural conditions that make their generosity necessary and their wealth possible. The hospital wing named for a donor exists because the system that produced the donor's wealth also produced the poverty that makes the hospital necessary. These are not separate stories. They are the same story."
(A) Statistical comparison
(B) Specific, vivid examples that illustrate each version
(C) Expert testimony
(D) Hypothetical scenarios
12. The phrase "as though each word in her second language cost something" uses
(A) Simile
(B) Metaphor
(C) Personification
(D) Litotes
13. The final sentence ("It was accurate. It was also, I would learn years later, the least interesting thing about why we moved") primarily serves to
(A) Undermine the mother's credibility
(B) Suggest that the full truth of the family's story is richer and more complex than the simplified English version
(C) Criticize the parent-teacher conference format
(D) Demonstrate that English is an inadequate language
14. The author's tone toward her mother is best described as
(A) Critical and distant
(B) Affectionate and observant
(C) Pitying and condescending
(D) Admiring but uninformed
15. The sentence structure of "In Spanish, she was expansive — quick to laugh, generous with stories, willing to argue" uses which device?
(A) Anaphora
(B) Asyndeton
(C) Polysyndeton
(D) Antithesis
16. The passage as a whole supports which implicit claim?
(A) Bilingualism should be encouraged in all households.
(B) Language shapes not just communication but identity and expression.
(C) English is an inferior language for personal expression.
(D) Immigration stories are always more complex than they appear.
17. The author's use of the word "possessed" to describe the neighbors' dog primarily serves to
(A) Suggest the mother was superstitious
(B) Convey the mother's colorful, expressive way of speaking in Spanish
(C) Indicate that the dog was actually dangerous
(D) Create a serious, ominous tone
18. The passage primarily achieves its effect through
(A) Logical argumentation with statistical evidence
(B) Vivid characterization and specific illustrative details
(C) Emotional manipulation and guilt
(D) Abstract philosophical reasoning
Passage 3 (Questions 19–27)
The following is an excerpt from a fictional speech by a community leader about a proposed development project.
"I stand before you today not to oppose development. Let me be clear about that. I understand that this city needs to grow, that empty lots do not pay taxes, and that the proposed mixed-use development would bring jobs and revenue. I have read the economic impact statement. I have studied the traffic studies. The numbers are not in dispute. What is in dispute is what kind of city we want to be. The proposed development includes 400 residential units, a grocery store, and a parking garage. What it does not include — what no one on the development team has mentioned in any of the public meetings I have attended — is any space for the community that currently exists on this site. The farmers' market that has operated on this land every Saturday for fifteen years. The informal soccer games that bring together families from four different neighborhoods. The bench under the oak tree where Mr. Huang has eaten his lunch every day since he retired from the post office. These are not impediments to progress. They are the progress — the kind that cannot be measured in tax revenue but that makes a place worth living in. I am asking the council to require the developer to preserve these community uses within the new development. This is not anti-development. It is pro-community." The following is an excerpt from a fictional essay about the language of weather forecasts.
"Weather forecasts have a peculiar relationship with certainty. They are among the few professional predictions that we expect to be wrong — not occasionally, not as a rare failure, but routinely and without consequence. When a meteorologist announces a thirty percent chance of rain and it does not rain, no one demands an investigation. No one writes an editorial questioning the competence of the National Weather Service. We accept the uncertainty because we understand, at some intuitive level, that weather is complex and that perfect prediction is impossible. This acceptance stands in sharp contrast to our treatment of uncertainty in other domains. In politics, a candidate who changes position is called a flip-flopper, as though adjusting one's views in response to new information were a character flaw rather than a sign of intellectual honesty. In medicine, a doctor who says 'I'm not sure' is often perceived as less competent than one who delivers a diagnosis with unwavering confidence, even when the uncertain doctor may be more accurate. We have, in other words, a culture that rewards false certainty and punishes the honest acknowledgment of complexity. Perhaps we could learn something from the meteorologist — not about barometric pressure or wind shear but about the wisdom of saying 'here is what I think is most likely, and here is the degree of confidence I have in that prediction, and here is what could change.' That formulation, applied more broadly, might make our public discourse slightly more honest and our public officials slightly more humble." The following is an excerpt from a fictional essay about memorization and education.
"There was a time when memorization was the foundation of education. Students recited poems, chanted multiplication tables, and committed to memory the names of kings and the dates of battles. Then progressive educators declared that memorization was rote, mechanical, and hostile to genuine understanding. Education, they argued, should develop critical thinking, not train human tape recorders. This critique had merit. Memorization without understanding is indeed a hollow exercise — a student who can recite the Gettysburg Address but cannot explain why it matters has learned words, not ideas. But the progressive critique went too far. In discarding memorization, we discarded something essential: the relationship between knowing something and holding it in your mind. There is a difference between reading a poem and knowing a poem. When you have memorized a poem, you carry it with you. It becomes part of your interior landscape, available not just when you choose to look it up but when you need it — when a line surfaces unbidden during a moment of grief or joy or confusion and connects your experience to something larger than yourself. The same is true of historical dates, mathematical formulas, and scientific principles. Memorization is not the opposite of understanding. It is a prerequisite for the kind of fluent, flexible thinking that we claim to value. You cannot think critically about a subject you do not know, and knowing — truly knowing — means holding information in your mind, not merely knowing where to find it." "We admire generosity but we do not fund it. We praise the donor who gives millions to a hospital wing but we design an economic system that rewards accumulation and penalizes distribution. The wealthy are celebrated for what they give away, never questioned about what they keep — as though charity were a substitute for justice rather than a symptom of its absence. Consider the rhetoric: we speak of 'giving back,' a phrase that implies that something was taken, that the accumulation of wealth involved a withdrawal from the common good that generosity merely repays. If wealth were distributed justly in the first place, there would be nothing to give back. I do not say this to condemn generosity. Generosity is a virtue. But it is a virtue that should be unnecessary at the scale at which we currently practice it. When a society relies on the voluntary kindness of the wealthy to fund hospitals, schools, and disaster relief, it has outsourced its obligations to the discretionary goodwill of its most privileged citizens. This arrangement flatters the wealthy — you are a benefactor, a philanthropist, a changer of lives — while obscuring the structural conditions that make their generosity necessary and their wealth possible. The hospital wing named for a donor exists because the system that produced the donor's wealth also produced the poverty that makes the hospital necessary. These are not separate stories. They are the same story."
20. The speaker's claim that "What is in dispute is what kind of city we want to be" is best described as
(A) A claim of fact
(B) A claim of value
(C) A claim of policy
(D) An enthymeme
21. The list of community activities (farmers' market, soccer games, Mr. Huang's bench) serves as
(A) Expert testimony
(B) Statistical evidence
(C) Concrete, emotionally resonant examples that give human dimension to an abstract argument
(D) A logical proof that the development should be stopped
22. The antithesis "not anti-development. It is pro-community" primarily serves to
(A) Redefine the debate by showing that supporting community and supporting development are not mutually exclusive
(B) Concede that the development is necessary
(C) Attack the developer's motives
(D) Introduce a new counterargument
23. Which appeal is dominant in the examples of the farmers' market, soccer games, and Mr. Huang?
(A) Logos
(B) Ethos
(C) Pathos
(D) Kairos
24. The speaker's statement "The numbers are not in dispute" functions primarily to
(A) Agree with the developer's data
(B) Acknowledge the strength of the opposing evidence before shifting to a different kind of argument
(C) Suggest that numbers are unimportant
(D) Introduce new statistical evidence
25. The organizational pattern of the speech is best described as
(A) Classical argument (exordium, narratio, confirmatio, refutatio, peroratio)
(B) Rogerian argument (neutral introduction, empathetic understanding of opposition, own position, common ground)
(C) Chronological narration
(D) Toulmin model with explicit labeling of each component
26. The reference to Mr. Huang eating lunch "every day since he retired from the post office" is an example of
(A) Abstract diction
(B) Concrete, specific detail that creates pathos by humanizing a statistic
(C) Statistical evidence about retirement
(D) A logical fallacy
27. The speaker's overall argument strategy is best described as
(A) Rejecting the development entirely
(B) Accepting the development's premises but arguing that the plan should be modified to preserve community space
(C) Proposing an alternative development plan
(D) Attacking the developer's credibility
Passage 4 (Questions 28–36)
The following is an excerpt from a fictional essay about the language of weather forecasts.
"Weather forecasts have a peculiar relationship with certainty. They are among the few professional predictions that we expect to be wrong — not occasionally, not as a rare failure, but routinely and without consequence. When a meteorologist announces a thirty percent chance of rain and it does not rain, no one demands an investigation. No one writes an editorial questioning the competence of the National Weather Service. We accept the uncertainty because we understand, at some intuitive level, that weather is complex and that perfect prediction is impossible. This acceptance stands in sharp contrast to our treatment of uncertainty in other domains. In politics, a candidate who changes position is called a flip-flopper, as though adjusting one's views in response to new information were a character flaw rather than a sign of intellectual honesty. In medicine, a doctor who says 'I'm not sure' is often perceived as less competent than one who delivers a diagnosis with unwavering confidence, even when the uncertain doctor may be more accurate. We have, in other words, a culture that rewards false certainty and punishes the honest acknowledgment of complexity. Perhaps we could learn something from the meteorologist — not about barometric pressure or wind shear but about the wisdom of saying 'here is what I think is most likely, and here is the degree of confidence I have in that prediction, and here is what could change.' That formulation, applied more broadly, might make our public discourse slightly more honest and our public officials slightly more humble." The following is an excerpt from a fictional essay about memorization and education.
"There was a time when memorization was the foundation of education. Students recited poems, chanted multiplication tables, and committed to memory the names of kings and the dates of battles. Then progressive educators declared that memorization was rote, mechanical, and hostile to genuine understanding. Education, they argued, should develop critical thinking, not train human tape recorders. This critique had merit. Memorization without understanding is indeed a hollow exercise — a student who can recite the Gettysburg Address but cannot explain why it matters has learned words, not ideas. But the progressive critique went too far. In discarding memorization, we discarded something essential: the relationship between knowing something and holding it in your mind. There is a difference between reading a poem and knowing a poem. When you have memorized a poem, you carry it with you. It becomes part of your interior landscape, available not just when you choose to look it up but when you need it — when a line surfaces unbidden during a moment of grief or joy or confusion and connects your experience to something larger than yourself. The same is true of historical dates, mathematical formulas, and scientific principles. Memorization is not the opposite of understanding. It is a prerequisite for the kind of fluent, flexible thinking that we claim to value. You cannot think critically about a subject you do not know, and knowing — truly knowing — means holding information in your mind, not merely knowing where to find it." "We admire generosity but we do not fund it. We praise the donor who gives millions to a hospital wing but we design an economic system that rewards accumulation and penalizes distribution. The wealthy are celebrated for what they give away, never questioned about what they keep — as though charity were a substitute for justice rather than a symptom of its absence. Consider the rhetoric: we speak of 'giving back,' a phrase that implies that something was taken, that the accumulation of wealth involved a withdrawal from the common good that generosity merely repays. If wealth were distributed justly in the first place, there would be nothing to give back. I do not say this to condemn generosity. Generosity is a virtue. But it is a virtue that should be unnecessary at the scale at which we currently practice it. When a society relies on the voluntary kindness of the wealthy to fund hospitals, schools, and disaster relief, it has outsourced its obligations to the discretionary goodwill of its most privileged citizens. This arrangement flatters the wealthy — you are a benefactor, a philanthropist, a changer of lives — while obscuring the structural conditions that make their generosity necessary and their wealth possible. The hospital wing named for a donor exists because the system that produced the donor's wealth also produced the poverty that makes the hospital necessary. These are not separate stories. They are the same story."
(B) Argue that our culture should be more accepting of uncertainty
(C) Criticize the National Weather Service
(D) Propose specific reforms to political campaigning
29. The passage primarily uses which rhetorical mode?
(A) Narration
(B) Comparison and contrast
(C) Process analysis
(D) Description
30. The author's comparison of weather forecasting with politics and medicine primarily serves to
(A) Demonstrate that weather forecasters are more skilled than politicians and doctors
(B) Highlight the inconsistency in how we treat uncertainty across different domains
(C) Argue that politicians and doctors should be held to the same standards as meteorologists
(D) Provide examples of logical fallacies
31. The phrase "a culture that rewards false certainty and punishes the honest acknowledgment of complexity" uses which device?
(A) Simile
(B) Antithesis
(C) Anaphora
(D) Metaphor
32. The author's tone in this passage is best described as
(A) Angry and confrontational
(B) Humorous and satirical
(C) Reflective and mildly critical
(D) Nostalgic and sentimental
33. Which of the following best describes the passage's reasoning?
(A) Deductive reasoning from a general principle about honesty
(B) Inductive reasoning from specific observations about how we treat uncertainty in different domains
(C) Neither — the passage does not use reasoning
(D) Circular reasoning
34. The sentence "That formulation, applied more broadly, might make our public discourse slightly more honest" is an example of
(A) An unqualified claim with no evidence
(B) A qualified claim that modestly proposes the application of the essay's insight
(C) A logical fallacy
(D) An emotional appeal
35. The author uses the example of weather forecasting primarily because
(A) It is a familiar experience that most readers share
(B) It provides the strongest evidence for the argument
(C) It allows the author to demonstrate expertise in meteorology
(D) It is the most important domain where uncertainty is accepted
36. The repetition of "here is" in the final long sentence ("here is what I think... and here is the degree... and here is what could change") is an example of
(A) Anaphora
(B) Epistrophe
(C) Asyndeton
(D) Polysyndeton
Passage 5 (Questions 37–45)
The following is an excerpt from a fictional essay about memorization and education.
"There was a time when memorization was the foundation of education. Students recited poems, chanted multiplication tables, and committed to memory the names of kings and the dates of battles. Then progressive educators declared that memorization was rote, mechanical, and hostile to genuine understanding. Education, they argued, should develop critical thinking, not train human tape recorders. This critique had merit. Memorization without understanding is indeed a hollow exercise — a student who can recite the Gettysburg Address but cannot explain why it matters has learned words, not ideas. But the progressive critique went too far. In discarding memorization, we discarded something essential: the relationship between knowing something and holding it in your mind. There is a difference between reading a poem and knowing a poem. When you have memorized a poem, you carry it with you. It becomes part of your interior landscape, available not just when you choose to look it up but when you need it — when a line surfaces unbidden during a moment of grief or joy or confusion and connects your experience to something larger than yourself. The same is true of historical dates, mathematical formulas, and scientific principles. Memorization is not the opposite of understanding. It is a prerequisite for the kind of fluent, flexible thinking that we claim to value. You cannot think critically about a subject you do not know, and knowing — truly knowing — means holding information in your mind, not merely knowing where to find it." "We admire generosity but we do not fund it. We praise the donor who gives millions to a hospital wing but we design an economic system that rewards accumulation and penalizes distribution. The wealthy are celebrated for what they give away, never questioned about what they keep — as though charity were a substitute for justice rather than a symptom of its absence. Consider the rhetoric: we speak of 'giving back,' a phrase that implies that something was taken, that the accumulation of wealth involved a withdrawal from the common good that generosity merely repays. If wealth were distributed justly in the first place, there would be nothing to give back. I do not say this to condemn generosity. Generosity is a virtue. But it is a virtue that should be unnecessary at the scale at which we currently practice it. When a society relies on the voluntary kindness of the wealthy to fund hospitals, schools, and disaster relief, it has outsourced its obligations to the discretionary goodwill of its most privileged citizens. This arrangement flatters the wealthy — you are a benefactor, a philanthropist, a changer of lives — while obscuring the structural conditions that make their generosity necessary and their wealth possible. The hospital wing named for a donor exists because the system that produced the donor's wealth also produced the poverty that makes the hospital necessary. These are not separate stories. They are the same story."
37. The author's overall position on memorization is best summarized as
(A) Memorization should be the primary method of education.
(B) Memorization was correctly criticized by progressive educators.
(C) Memorization, while insufficient alone, is a valuable and necessary component of learning.
(D) Memorization is useful only for poetry.
38. The author's treatment of the progressive educators' critique ("This critique had merit") is an example of
(A) Concession
(B) Refutation
(C) Straw man
(D) Ad hominem
39. The antithesis "reading a poem and knowing a poem" primarily serves to
(A) Show that both activities are equally valuable
(B) Distinguish between superficial familiarity and deep, internalized understanding
(C) Argue that reading is superior to memorization
(D) Criticize people who read poetry
40. Which of the following best describes the author's reasoning?
(A) Deductive: memorization leads to knowing; knowing is necessary for critical thinking; therefore memorization is necessary for critical thinking.
(B) Inductive: the author provides many examples and draws a general conclusion.
(C) Neither inductive nor deductive.
(D) Circular reasoning: the author assumes what she is trying to prove.
41. The author uses the phrase "human tape recorders" as
(A) A neutral description of students who memorize
(B) A metaphor coined by progressive educators that the author quotes to represent their view
(C) An insult directed at students
(D) A compliment about memory capacity
42. The sentence "You cannot think critically about a subject you do not know" represents the author's
(A) Evidence
(B) Warrant
(C) Claim
(D) Rebuttal
43. The author's reference to "a line surfaces unbidden during a moment of grief or joy" primarily appeals to
(A) Logos
(B) Ethos
(C) Pathos
(D) Kairos
44. The passage uses which organizational pattern?
(A) Chronological
(B) Problem-solution (identifying an educational problem and proposing a solution)
(C) Classical argument with concession, refutation, and a new synthesis
(D) Spatial description
45. The final distinction — "holding information in your mind, not merely knowing where to find it" — uses which device?
(A) Metaphor
(B) Antithesis
(C) Chiasmus
(D) Hyperbole
Section II: Free-Response Questions
Time: 2 hours 15 minutes (including 15-minute reading period)
Question 1: Synthesis Essay (Suggested time: 55 minutes)
The Question: The United States is one of the few developed nations that does not guarantee paid family leave for new parents. Some argue that paid family leave should be a federal requirement. Others argue that leave policy should be left to individual employers or state governments.
Read the following seven sources carefully, including the introductory information for each source. Then, in an essay that synthesizes at least three of the sources, develop a position on whether the United States should establish a federal paid family leave policy.
Source A: A report from the Bureau of Labor Statistics indicating that only 23 percent of private-sector workers in the United States have access to paid family leave through their employers. Access is highest among high-income workers (43 percent) and lowest among low-income workers (8 percent).
Source B: An op-ed by a small business owner arguing that a federal leave mandate would impose significant costs on small businesses that cannot afford to replace employees during extended absences. The owner notes that a 12-week leave for a key employee could cost a small business thousands in temporary staffing and lost productivity.
Source C: A longitudinal study published in a medical journal finding that infants whose parents took at least 12 weeks of leave had lower rates of hospitalization in their first year, higher rates of breastfeeding, and stronger parent-child attachment as measured by standardized assessments at age two.
Source D: A report from an international economic organization comparing family leave policies across 41 countries. The report finds that countries with national paid leave programs have higher female labor force participation rates and smaller gender wage gaps than countries without such programs.
Source E: A letter from a state governor who implemented a state-level paid leave program. The governor reports that after three years, employer surveys showed that 85 percent found the program had a neutral or positive effect on their business, and employee retention rates had improved by 15 percent.
Source F: A fiscal analysis by a nonpartisan policy institute estimating that a federal paid family leave program modeled on existing state programs would cost approximately 0.2 percent of GDP, funded through a small payroll tax similar to Social Security.
Source G: An essay by a cultural commentator arguing that the debate over paid family leave reflects a deeper cultural question about whether society values caregiving as much as it values economic production, and that framing leave as a cost rather than an investment reveals misplaced priorities.
Question 2: Rhetorical Analysis (Suggested time: 40 minutes)
Read the following passage carefully. Write an essay in which you analyze how the writer uses rhetorical strategies to develop her argument about the relationship between wealth and generosity.
"We admire generosity but we do not fund it. We praise the donor who gives millions to a hospital wing but we design an economic system that rewards accumulation and penalizes distribution. The wealthy are celebrated for what they give away, never questioned about what they keep — as though charity were a substitute for justice rather than a symptom of its absence. Consider the rhetoric: we speak of 'giving back,' a phrase that implies that something was taken, that the accumulation of wealth involved a withdrawal from the common good that generosity merely repays. If wealth were distributed justly in the first place, there would be nothing to give back. I do not say this to condemn generosity. Generosity is a virtue. But it is a virtue that should be unnecessary at the scale at which we currently practice it. When a society relies on the voluntary kindness of the wealthy to fund hospitals, schools, and disaster relief, it has outsourced its obligations to the discretionary goodwill of its most privileged citizens. This arrangement flatters the wealthy — you are a benefactor, a philanthropist, a changer of lives — while obscuring the structural conditions that make their generosity necessary and their wealth possible. The hospital wing named for a donor exists because the system that produced the donor's wealth also produced the poverty that makes the hospital necessary. These are not separate stories. They are the same story."
Question 3: Argument (Suggested time: 40 minutes)
Write an essay that argues your position on the following statement:
"In a democratic society, citizens have a responsibility to be informed about public issues, even when those issues do not directly affect them personally."
Support your argument with appropriate evidence and reasoning. You may draw on your reading, knowledge, and personal experience.
End of Exam
Answer Key & Rubric
AP English Language and Composition — Full Practice Exam Answer Key and Scoring Rubrics
Section I: Multiple-Choice Answer Key
Passage 1 (Walking and Thinking)
- (B) The passage informs the reader about research on walking and thinking, but its ultimate purpose is persuasive: to argue that our institutions should accommodate the connection between walking and thinking. The final paragraph makes a clear argumentative claim.
- (B) The parallel structure of "the philosopher walked and thought / the farmer walked and planned / the shepherd walked and wondered" creates a rhythmic, idealized portrait of the past that contrasts sharply with the description of modern schools and offices. The examples serve a contrastive, not an evidentiary, function.
- (B) Personification — the mind is given the human ability to "respect" or "not respect" something. The mind doesn't literally have preferences; attributing this capacity to it makes the abstract concept of cognitive function feel like a character with its own will.
- (C) The tone is thoughtful (the author considers history, research, and practical implications) and mildly critical (the criticism of modern design is present but measured — "the costs of this design are invisible but real" rather than an angry denunciation).
- (A) The research findings serve as logos — empirical evidence that supports the argument that walking improves creative thinking. The author cites studies, findings, and suggested mechanisms, all hallmarks of a logical appeal.
- (A) A loose (cumulative) sentence presents the main clause first and then adds modifying information. The main clause ("the practical implication is clear") comes first, followed by the dependent clause ("we have designed...").
- (A) This is a claim of fact — the author asserts that we have designed our institutions to suppress a thinking tool. The claim is debatable and supported by the passage's evidence.
- (B) The passage identifies a problem (our institutions don't accommodate the walking-thinking connection) and implies a solution (they should). It is not chronological (it moves between past and present), not purely cause-effect (it includes comparison), and not spatial.
- (C) "the slow erosion of the connection between body and mind that walking sustains" is a relative clause (beginning with "that") modifying "erosion." It is a dependent clause, not an independent one.
Passage 2 (Bilingual Household)
- (B) The dominant mode is comparison and contrast. The author systematically contrasts the mother's Spanish-speaking self with her English-speaking self.
- (B) The author provides specific, vivid examples — the storytelling with sound effects in Spanish versus the single sentence "We moved here for better opportunities" in English — to illustrate each version of the mother.
- (A) "As though each word in her second language cost something" is a simile using "as though" to compare word choice to a financial transaction.
- (B) The final sentence suggests that the English version of the story is accurate but incomplete — the real, interesting, complex reasons were lost in translation. This implies the full truth is richer than any single-language version can capture.
- (B) The author observes her mother with warmth and insight, noting her expressive Spanish self and her careful English self without judgment. The tone is affectionate ("she was never silent") and perceptive.
- (B) Asyndeton — the list "quick to laugh, generous with stories, willing to argue" omits conjunctions, creating a rapid, flowing rhythm that conveys expansiveness.
- (B) The passage implies that language shapes identity — the same person expresses different aspects of herself in different languages. The mother is not a different person, but the language she uses enables or constrains different modes of self-expression.
- (B) The word "possessed" conveys the mother's colorful, dramatic way of speaking in Spanish — she would make a neighbor's dog sound like a supernatural event. It reveals her expressiveness, not actual superstition.
- (B) The passage achieves its effect entirely through vivid characterization (the two versions of the mother) and specific, concrete details (sound effects, impersonations, the single sentence at the conference).
Passage 3 (Development Project)
- (B) By opening with a concession (acknowledging the benefits of development), the speaker builds credibility and prevents the audience from categorizing her as simply anti-growth. This is a Rogerian strategy.
- (B) The claim is a claim of value — it asks what kind of city "we want to be," which is a judgment about values and priorities.
- (C) The examples are concrete, emotionally resonant illustrations that give human dimension to the abstract argument about community value. They appeal to pathos.
- (A) The antithesis reframes the debate: supporting community space is not opposing development. The two are compatible, and this redefinition weakens the developer's framing.
- (C) The examples of the farmers' market, soccer games, and Mr. Huang are designed to create an emotional connection with the audience, making the abstract concept of "community" tangible and personal.
- (B) The speaker acknowledges the strength of the developer's data ("The numbers are not in dispute") before pivoting to a different kind of argument — one about values and community rather than economics.
- (B) The speech follows a Rogerian structure: it opens neutrally, acknowledges the opposing position's merits, presents its own position empathetically, and seeks common ground.
- (B) The detail about Mr. Huang is a concrete, specific image that gives human dimension to an abstract argument about community, creating pathos through its specificity and regularity.
- (B) The speaker accepts the development's economic benefits but argues that the plan should preserve existing community uses. The argument is for modification, not rejection.
Passage 4 (Weather Forecasts and Uncertainty)
- (B) The passage uses weather forecasting as a starting point for a broader argument about how our culture treats uncertainty. The primary purpose is to argue for greater acceptance of uncertainty.
- (B) The passage compares and contrasts how we treat uncertainty in weather forecasting versus politics versus medicine. This comparison is the central rhetorical strategy.
- (B) The comparison highlights an inconsistency: we accept uncertainty in weather but punish it in politics and medicine. This inconsistency supports the author's argument that our culture has an unhealthy relationship with uncertainty.
- (B) "Rewards false certainty" is balanced against "punishes the honest acknowledgment of complexity" — a clear antithesis that captures the passage's central critique.
- (C) The author is reflective (considering the implications of how we treat uncertainty) and mildly critical (criticizing cultural attitudes without anger or urgency).
- (B) The author observes specific instances (weather, politics, medicine) and draws a general conclusion about our culture's treatment of uncertainty. This is inductive reasoning.
- (B) The qualifier "might" and the modest claim ("slightly more honest") make this a qualified, carefully worded proposal rather than an overreaching assertion.
- (A) Weather forecasting is a familiar experience that virtually every reader shares, making it an accessible entry point for the argument.
- (A) Anaphora — the repetition of "here is" at the beginning of successive clauses.
Passage 5 (Memorization and Education)
- (C) The author concedes that memorization without understanding is insufficient (agreeing with the progressive critique) but argues that memorization is a prerequisite for the deep, flexible thinking that education should develop.
- (A) The statement "This critique had merit" is a concession — the author acknowledges that the opposing position has a valid point before refuting its broader implications.
- (B) The antithesis distinguishes between two levels of engagement with a poem: surface-level familiarity (reading) and deep internalization (knowing through memorization).
- (A) The author's reasoning is deductive: memorization leads to knowing → knowing is necessary for critical thinking → therefore memorization is necessary for critical thinking. This is a syllogistic structure.
- (B) The author quotes this metaphor to represent the progressive educators' view. The quotation marks (implied by context) signal that this is their language, not the author's own.
- (B) This statement is the warrant — the unstated assumption underlying the argument. The claim is that memorization is valuable; the evidence includes the examples of poetry and other subjects; the warrant is that you cannot think critically about what you do not truly know.
- (C) The image of a line surfacing during "a moment of grief or joy" appeals to the reader's emotions and personal experience.
- (C) The passage follows a classical structure: it introduces the issue (the history of memorization), concedes a point (the progressive critique had merit), refutes the broader conclusion (progressive educators went too far), presents new evidence and reasoning, and concludes with a restatement of the thesis.
- (B) Antithesis — "holding information in your mind" is contrasted with "merely knowing where to find it."
Section II: Free-Response Scoring Rubrics
General Scoring Information
Each of the three essays is scored on a 6-point scale:
- 6: Sophisticated, thorough, and well-written
- 5: Effective and well-developed
- 4: Adequate but may have uneven development or weaker prose
- 3: Inadequate — limited development, weak evidence, or significant writing issues
- 2: Minimal — very little development, weak evidence, and/or significant problems
- 1: Little success — essay may be off-topic, barely developed, or incomprehensible
Question 1: Synthesis Essay Scoring Rubric
Prompt: Should the United States establish a federal paid family leave policy?
Thesis: Does the essay present a clear, defensible position on the question?
| Score | Thesis | Evidence and Commentary | Sophistication |
|---|---|---|---|
| 6 | Thesis is precise, nuanced, and clearly establishes the essay's argument. | Essay synthesizes at least 3 sources effectively, integrating them into the writer's own argument. Each source is used purposefully, not merely summarized. Commentary explains the significance of the evidence. | Essay demonstrates sophistication through complex argumentation, recognition of nuance, or particularly effective prose. |
| 5 | Thesis is clear and defensible. | Essay synthesizes at least 3 sources, integrating them into the argument with adequate commentary. Some sources may be used more effectively than others. | Essay is well-developed and may show moments of sophistication. |
| 4 | Thesis is present but may be vague, overly broad, or lack nuance. | Essay uses at least 3 sources but may treat them superficially (summary rather than synthesis) or organize by source rather than by idea. Commentary is present but may be repetitive or generic. | Essay is adequate but does not demonstrate sophisticated thinking or writing. |
| 3 | Thesis is present but unclear, vague, or merely repeats the prompt. | Essay uses fewer than 3 sources or uses sources without meaningful integration (dropping in quotations without analysis). Commentary is minimal or absent. | Essay demonstrates limited understanding of synthesis. |
| 2 | Thesis may be missing or merely implies a position. | Essay uses 1–2 sources ineffectively or not at all. Little to no commentary. | Essay shows minimal understanding of the task. |
| 1 | No clear thesis. | Essay may not use any sources or may be off-topic. | Essay shows little to no understanding of synthesis. |
Sample Thesis at Each Level:
- 6-level: "While concerns about the cost of federal paid family leave to small businesses are legitimate, the health benefits for infants, the positive effects on female labor force participation, and the modest cost of implementation — approximately 0.2 percent of GDP — make a federal program not only justifiable but necessary to address the current inequity in access to leave."
- 5-level: "The United States should establish a federal paid family leave program because the current system leaves most workers without access and the benefits to families and the economy outweigh the costs."
- 4-level: "Paid family leave is important and the government should provide it for all workers."
Key Source Integration Strategies to Reward:
- Using Source A (BLS data) and Source C (health outcomes) together to show that those who most need leave (low-income workers) are least likely to have access
- Using Source B (small business concerns) as a counterargument and Source E (governor's experience) as a rebuttal
- Using Source F (fiscal analysis) to address the cost objection with specific data
- Using Source G (cultural commentary) to add a values-based dimension to an otherwise evidence-driven argument
Question 2: Rhetorical Analysis Scoring Rubric
Prompt: Analyze how the writer uses rhetorical strategies to develop her argument about wealth and generosity.
| Score | Thesis | Evidence and Commentary | Sophistication |
|---|---|---|---|
| 6 | Thesis precisely identifies the rhetorical strategies and explains how they develop the argument. | Essay provides specific, well-chosen textual evidence and thoroughly analyzes the effect of each strategy on the argument. Analysis connects each choice to the writer's purpose. | Essay demonstrates sophistication through complex analysis, recognition of how strategies work together, or particularly effective prose. |
| 5 | Thesis clearly identifies strategies and explains their relationship to the argument. | Essay provides specific evidence and analyzes the effect of strategies. Analysis is thorough but may miss some nuances. | Essay is well-developed and may show moments of sophistication. |
| 4 | Thesis identifies strategies but may not fully explain their relationship to the argument. | Essay provides evidence but analysis may be superficial, formulaic, or inconsistent. Some strategies may be named without explaining their effects. | Essay is adequate but does not demonstrate sophisticated analysis. |
| 3 | Thesis is vague or merely restates the prompt. | Essay provides limited evidence or lists strategies without analyzing their effects. Commentary is minimal or inaccurate. | Essay demonstrates limited analytical skill. |
| 2 | Thesis may be missing. | Essay provides little evidence and minimal or no analysis. | Essay shows minimal understanding of rhetorical analysis. |
| 1 | No discernible thesis. | Essay may merely summarize the passage or be off-topic. | Essay shows little to no understanding of rhetorical analysis. |
Key Strategies Students Should Identify:
- Diction analysis ("giving back"): The writer analyzes the phrase "giving back" to reveal its implicit admission — that wealth accumulation involved "taking." This word-level analysis supports the argument that charity is not generosity but partial restitution.
- Antithesis and parallelism: "We admire generosity but we do not fund it" and "reward accumulation and penalize distribution" create balanced contrasts that reveal contradictions in cultural attitudes.
- Concessive structure: "I do not say this to condemn generosity. Generosity is a virtue." The concession prevents the argument from being dismissed as anti-charity.
- Reframing: The writer reframes philanthropy from "generosity" to "symptom of justice's absence," shifting the reader's perspective on a cultural institution.
- Final chiasmus/structural parallel: "The hospital wing named for a donor exists because the system that produced the donor's wealth also produced the poverty that makes the hospital necessary." This sentence connects wealth and poverty as products of the same system, unifying the essay's argument.
Sample Strong Thesis: "The writer develops her argument that charity is a symptom of injustice rather than a solution to it through precise diction analysis, antithetical structures that expose cultural contradictions, and a structural framework that redefines generosity as a failure of systemic justice."
Question 3: Argument Scoring Rubric
Prompt: Argue your position on the statement: "In a democratic society, citizens have a responsibility to be informed about public issues, even when those issues do not directly affect them personally."
| Score | Thesis | Evidence and Commentary | Sophistication |
|---|---|---|---|
| 6 | Thesis is precise, taking a clear and nuanced position on the statement. | Essay provides specific, relevant evidence (from reading, history, current events, or experience) and develops each piece of evidence with thorough reasoning. | Essay demonstrates sophistication through complex argumentation, qualification, recognition of counterarguments, or particularly effective prose. |
| 5 | Thesis is clear and takes a defensible position. | Essay provides specific evidence and develops it with adequate reasoning. | Essay is well-developed and may show moments of sophistication. |
| 4 | Thesis is present but may be vague or lack nuance. | Essay provides some evidence but development may be uneven. Reasoning may be generic or repetitive. | Essay is adequate but does not demonstrate sophisticated thinking. |
| 3 | Thesis is present but unclear or merely restates the prompt. | Essay provides minimal evidence. Reasoning is limited or unclear. | Essay demonstrates limited argumentative skill. |
| 2 | Thesis may be missing or merely implies a position. | Essay provides little evidence or evidence that is irrelevant or inaccurate. | Essay shows minimal understanding of argumentation. |
| 1 | No clear thesis. | Essay may be off-topic or barely developed. | Essay shows little to no understanding of argumentation. |
Possible Approaches:
Affirming the statement:
- Democratic governance requires an informed electorate (historical evidence: founding principles, civic republicanism)
- Issues that don't affect you today may affect you tomorrow (public health, environmental policy)
- Uninformed voters are vulnerable to manipulation (evidence from political science research on misinformation)
- Civic responsibility extends beyond self-interest (philosophical arguments from democratic theory)
Qualifying the statement:
- Citizens have a responsibility to be informed, but the information environment makes this increasingly difficult (media fragmentation, misinformation)
- The responsibility is shared — citizens have an obligation, but institutions (schools, media, government) have an obligation to make accurate information accessible
- "Informed" should not mean "exhaustively knowledgeable on every issue" — practical limits exist
Challenging the statement (more difficult but possible):
- Time and cognitive resources are finite; citizens cannot be fully informed on every issue
- Representative democracy exists partly because direct citizen participation on every issue is impractical
- Specialization and division of labor apply to citizenship as well as economics
Evidence that could strengthen any position:
- Historical examples of uninformed electorates producing poor outcomes
- Contemporary examples of misinformation affecting public policy
- Philosophical references (Mill, Dewey, Rousseau)
- Personal or observed examples of civic engagement (or disengagement)
Sample Strong Thesis (Qualifying): "While the ideal of an informed citizenry is essential to democratic functioning, holding individual citizens solely responsible for their own information is insufficient in an era of systematic misinformation; rather, the responsibility for an informed public must be shared between citizens who make good-faith efforts to engage and institutions that have an obligation to provide accurate, accessible information."
Score Conversion Estimate
Section I: 45 MCQ × 1 point each = 45 raw points
Section II: 3 FRQs × 6 points each = 18 raw points maximum (scaled by College Board)
| Composite Score Range | Approximate AP Score |
|---|---|
| 113–150 | 5 |
| 93–112 | 4 |
| 73–92 | 3 |
| 43–72 | 2 |
| 0–42 | 1 |
Note: These ranges are approximate estimates for practice purposes. The actual AP scoring process involves statistical adjustments.